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TitanicVoicesInstallment XXIII by ~Amanda-San:iconAmanda-San:



I pulled crimson petal
and petal
from my dieing rose
to float there in the water;
though they didn’t stay
long
as the ship thrust on
ever faster

Goodbye was all the easier
the more mile we undertook
-and yet, each tear grew
looser
with every daydream I
dared dream
of my red and lovely rose.

FAITH, FAITH-
I screamed into the April air
America bring me hope for
I bring you
my huddled, my
poor
my
tired

Speed on, ever
faster
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Author's Comments

No, your computer screen isn't playing tricks on you- this really is a Titanic Voice Installment. It's pretty weak compared to some others that I've written and more emotion based than based on the story of Titanic, but I thought it was simple enough to portray. A young girl, who for some reason cannot have her lover- he is dead, maybe, or refused to be with her. Either way, she is running away to America to escape all that sadness.

Ah, the irony.

Anyway, I have only a few more to spit out before the big halfway point piece.

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